In the weekend I went to my uncles friends house and I really enjoyed it because we ate Pizza and we also played fun games. On Sunday I went to church early in the morning and after the church was finished I went and played some basketball and soccer and it was really fun. After the church I went to my cousins house
and I was playing some fun games. I really enjoyed this weekend because it was really fun.
Hey Samuel I like you're story about you're weekend but maybe try to use different word in the beginning of the sentences.
ReplyDeleteHi Sam, I really like you're story about you're weekend but maybe you should explain more and use more detailed words to describe your're weekend.
ReplyDeleteHi samuel I like your weekend but you could try to say what games you played
ReplyDeleteHi Sam.I really like was that you exlain what did you do in the weekend,you maybe try to use different words about who? went with you,but well done Sam,keep it up. :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Sam. My name is Callan from Grey Main School.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you described your weekend. Maybe you could use a different starting next time. Who won the basketball and soccer game and what were the games you played? From Callan
hi i like your story i think you can add more writing
ReplyDeletehi i like your story i think you can add more writing
ReplyDeleteHey Samuel
ReplyDeleteI like your descriptive writing but maybe add a bit more.
Hey Samuel I like Your Descriptive writing About how your weekend went maybe you could add a Bit More
ReplyDeleteHi Samuel,
ReplyDeleteSounds like you had so much fun in the weekends.You told us much about your weekends and I wish I was there to have fun as well.What topping pizza did you have? and what sort of games did you play with you cousins? Great Writing Samuel!!!! Like to see more of your writing on your blog like this !!!